Finnegan Fish ( A Story by Erin)

Finnagan fish was a fantastic fish. one Day when he was playing a game his sister came up and snaped Why Do Yo always win. I dont Know he siad and Swam all the way tothe other end of the pond she folloed him she was fast But he was fastor after that he hid in the seaweed. finnagan sat and thought he did not want his sister to think he was Better than her. he thought for a little while. iv got it he shouted. Ill have A…what criad a smal voice he looked down and saw nothing. But [s]he heard something it siad…whawtahtwhatwahtwhatwhatwhat  [?] he looked down again and saw a smal miarmiad…a race of course. are you shre siad the miarmiad. yes! he siad the miarmiad did not like my plan. in fact she shouted this wont work. she gave me another plan it was much Better I woud Pretend I lost the [race] so she did not think I was Better then her and thats just what we did. and it woiked.

Last week of term 3, 2011

 

One Response to “Finnegan Fish ( A Story by Erin)”

  1. marymckenzieMary McKenzie 08/10/2011 at 9:45 pm #

    Erin. I love your story – and how much you seem to have learned since you went away

    Congratulations

    Love gran xox

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